We met at this festival…our eyes met, jab we met! and we could hear violins playing around us, there was love in the air and….and…..WAKE UP!! None of the aforesaid bull shit happened. Ours is a tale of a different kind!! so, for those who want to know, read the following poem (if one may call it so, lets just call it a limerick, I am still uncertain though) and, well, the rest is for you to ponder upon……
We have been together for a year and a half now
We’ve not had even a squabble since,
Many marvel how?
We think of the same things and even say the same things at the same time,
according to the Indian constitution (if you have a dirty mind and if you know what I am talking about),
you will probably think this is a crime!!
We can talk to each other for hours without getting bored,
About anything at all,From career decisions to why the hell did the chicken cross the road!(Note- forced rhyme)
We have laughed together, cried together even traveled together,
Irrespective of what so ever is the weather!
(Note-forced rhyme again!!)
We understand each other to the core
I couldn’t have asked god for more.
It troubles one to see a mark of worry on the others face,
Our bond is getting stronger by god’s grace!
My better half is a part of me now,
Can’t think of life without you dear!
The journey for us has just begun,
The future will bring us even more near!!
(Disclaimer- do not rate my literary skills on this piece.
if you have a raised eyebrow, You have a dirty mind.
We are both straight n single! however, not ready to mingle!! )
20 comments:
haha mariya...you've beaten everything else with this one man!!! and it has turned out to be one heck of a poem/ limerick forced rhymes notwithstanding...
but ya violins did play!!! i also sand 'tumhe jo maine dekha...' damn! didn't happen for you??? hopefully some other time!!!
i hope we stay like this forever and it is only fair that mine is the first comment here...
so anyone else eying her...WATCH OUT!!! i can hurt...and real bad...if you mess with her!!!
okay...that wasn't supposed to be 'sand'...guess i've been dreaming of beaches far too much...i meant 'sang'!
haha,,,,,i did hear you sing,,did'nt want to make that public, love!!
you did you did??? at last! i thought i just wasted my energy and vocal chords!!! phew!!!
p.s. you could've joined, you know, its a duet :D
d repeated disclaimers wud even give st.teresa a dirty mind :D:D
jokes apart...nice piece,forced or not,d rhyming was pretty gud as well!!
@brown eyes--am not eyeing her*better safe than sorry* :D
now thats called an intelligent decision!! :P
yr poem made me go like .. "okhayyyyy".. The cat is finally out of the bag n now we know that ashish is not the only shady guy around... lol :P
oh btw shahnaaz... pardon me for such an observation but pray do not come too hard on me for this.. lolzz :p:p
o no i wnt...you are free of danger :)
@behind brown eyes
thankk the youss....
*sigh of relief*
am i in damand or wat??!!:P
oops///demand not damand!!!
u doubt tht honey?
i dont !!ofcourse not, wid both of u arnd :P!!was just tryin to be humble re!!
o my dear...you are more in demand than that! do not forget richa and surabhi :P
I feel left out *mopes*
bbe*ur memory scares me gurl!!u
remember names that i ...hmmmm
tigress- psst..some things are just meant to be kept out of the public eye!!i just wanted u to be safe from BBE AND megha!!
huh?? sumone's been conspiring eh?? *raised eyebrows*
no no.......not at all,,,aaa,,,mmmm,,aaaamm,,,mmmmu hm uhm ahem ahem
scared*****
read a part of it...fell of my chair in the middle of the office laughing...got up...read some more...fell down yet again laughing...got up and read the remaining.
hmmm...violins huh? damn! (read the unwritten)
and well...the pics are great. brilliant photoshop skills must say...hehe...
HAIL MARIYA...AND YOUR "BETTER HALF"
:D
tanku tanku!!!!
the pics tho are not my work!!!
aah!! the humble me!!
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