Wednesday, April 15, 2009

My Moonlady...


She sits by herself,
With hollows in her heart.
She likes to believe she brightens the otherwise dull world,
But the world, it deprives her of this happiness.

She calmly bears solitude,
While the world around her moves at its usual pace.

At times, she is forced to hide behind dark,dead shadows.
She sits up there, in the fa├žade of a queen like existence,
Little does anyone know, that her twinkling subjects are not at her mercy.

She doesn’t complain, they say her existence is on rent.
Like a phoenix she stands tall on days,
And disappears into thin air on some, like she never was.
They don’t question her arrival, her leaving,
They know she won’t be gone for long, they take her for granted
She lets them…

I can see her face from far away,
I can see a change of emotions in it everyday.
She smiles upon me; I can even see her sigh,
I see an expression sometimes on her
A look which says, she just bid her beloved ….goodbye.

In some ways she is like me
In some I wish I was like her….
My moon-lady.

19 comments:

genie said...

Marvelous :) :) ... but she just can not bid goodbye to her beloved....she has to be there ...she signifies the hope of change to me in this otherwise dull world ...she signifies love ...and there is nothing more beautiful and honest than love !
ps- Thanks for the blog alert !

genie said...

and also.....the blog-picture....could it be more apt? Beautiful:)

Whats in a name.......... said...
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Whats in a name.......... said...

genie- thankyou so much:)...
i meant,she, is there always, she bids goodbye to her beloved who leaves her....
i loved the pic the first time i saw it myself, glad u appreciate it.:)

Wizard OfCourse said...

wian...this is really good! and i could actually see someone through your words. of course...the obvious need not be stated ;)
and i had come online to check your reply to my comment. and guess what i found?! my comment wasn't even there!!

Whats in a name.......... said...

wizard-and i was wondering y have thou not have not commented!!! that deleted comment, is mine, it had supreme typo errors!!!
anyway,
am am bherry happy you liked it!!

Anonymous said...

I THINK I M IN ONE OF THOSE MOODS WHERE I CAN JUST SHOWER!

VJ.. :) said...

Aha! Now this is good blogging. You brighten this otherwise dull world too! :)

What's In A Name ? said...

This moonlady of yours sounds pensive. And look what that does to her subjects! Makes them like "her".

Wizard OfCourse said...

dear wian...supreme typo errors from you? unlikely :P
and well, i had to like the piece because (bee cause) it was so very well written :)
and of course, the fact that it rejuvenated a few old and happy memories just added that little extra for this piece to be perfect!

comfortably numb said...

beautiful...amazing portrayal of that oft-portrayed entity...n in a much better avatar too:)
Chandni raat mein jab saaya bhi saath chod deta hai...to ek akela chand hi hai jo hamare tanhayee ka saathi rehta hai:)

Whats in a name.......... said...

americanising desi- shower what?praise??:P

vj-muah gurl!!

namesake- Hmmmm....

wizard-:) :) beeee-cause eh??hehe

numb-thanks a lot! very well said!

comfortably numb said...

what's a panna, Wian???

Whats in a name.......... said...

arrey panna is an amazing mango drink generally made at home..it helps u escape the bad effects of heat and also saves you from a sunstroke to some extent!! and its yummm made from raw mangoes!!slurppp

Wizard OfCourse said...

wian...its aam panna...not panna...

comfortably numb said...

arre thts what I meant by kacche aam ki sharbat...didn't know it was called "panna" :)

Whats in a name.......... said...

wizard-wateva!!u dunno how its made so.....
numb-hehe!!yeah!

Wizard OfCourse said...

hehe me pulling your leg...of course you don't know how its made!! :P

Whats in a name.......... said...

wizard-huh huh huh!!!!i do !!u dont!!!and if u do..i want proof!!send me a trial!! *prays to god to be able to survive it* *gulp* :P