Tuesday, April 29, 2008

ANKAHEE....



BEWARE!! THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT URDU POETRY, I DONT KNOW IF U WILL SURVIVE READING THIS!!

Tanhaaee kya hai?
Tanhaaee gar kabhie akelepan ka dariya hai, to kabhi khud ko samajhne ka zariya.
Kabhie ek pal bhi tanhaaee me guzar nahee paataa hai
To kabhie is tanhaaee me bahut mazaa aata hai.
Tanhaee ko akelaapan samajhne kee ghalti karne vaalo,
Shor o gul se door, isee tanhaaee mein to, insaan apne aapko,
Apnee hee maujoodgi ka ehsaas dilaa paata hai!!

Aasoon kya hain??
khushi ho ya gham, ye kabhie bhi jhalak jaate hain
kabhi rote ki, to kabhi haste ki aankho me nazar aate hain.
duniya ke tano ke darr se, kabhie log inhe aakhon ka kachda keh kar chupa lete hain,
to kabhie apne dard ko chupa, inhe khushi ke aasuon mein tabdeel kar lete hain!!


Andhera kya hai?
Andhera gar gham ke baadlon ka gehra saaya hai,
to andhere mein hee roshni ka raaz bhi samaayaa hai.
Andhere mein gum hote, andhere se darte logon,
aaj ka andhera hee to kal kee roshni ka paighaam laayaa hai!!


Yaad kya hai??
Bhool kar cheezon ko yaad kiya jata hai,
bhool kar jab koi bahut yaad aata hai,
chehra jab uska aakhon mein aasoon le aata hai,
tab dil dhikkar ke kehta hai, “aye dost, tujhe koi haq nahi use yaad karne ka,
yaad to use kiya jaataa hai jise ye dil kabhie bhula bhi pataa hai”


Khaamoshi kya hai??
Khaamoshi ek anjaanaa ehsaas hai,
phir bhi lagta jaana pehchaana saa ankahaa raaz hai.
is ehsaas ko, raaz ko kuch kehte hue hai maine suna!!
log to aaj bolte ko khaamosh kar dete hain
maine to khaamoshi ko baate karte hue hai suna!!

12 comments:

behind brown eyes... said...

beautiful piece...thoughtful and thought provoking...absolutely heartfelt and of course, very true!
keep the lovely words flowing!!!!

Whats in a name.......... said...

am glad you survived reading it!!:) :)

Wizard OfCourse said...

first attempt?! stop fibbing mariya!!
can't be!!
beautifully written and very much from the heart...specially liked tanhaee...khamoshee and yaad.
gave me a feeling of deja vu :)
but really...now looking forward to urdu pieces from you too...
brilliant and beautifully put.

Amazing Greys said...

i suck at hindi, leave alone urdu, but whatever i understood of it, it was wonderful. how bout an english translation for us poor souls? :P

Whats in a name.......... said...

hehe,,,well wil surely try n do that!!!

shilpi said...

as ur english ones,, this too is a brilliant one... n cant stop myself frm repeating the same thing... dept and emotions such beautifully out together,, keep writing.....

Whats in a name.......... said...

thanks shilpi!!! :)

comfortably numb said...

seems 2 b straight from the deep confines of your heart....great piece of poetry
btw....if this ur 1st attempt,then u r surely going 2 scale heights....
as they say...."gar aaghaaz mein itni kashish hai to anjaam to suhaana hi hona hai"

Whats in a name.......... said...

comfortably numb- Thanks a lot!!!

comfortably numb said...

welcum always...waise bhi a gud piece must be appreciated...!

p.s. i linked ur blog to mine which is in it's nascency...hope u dnt mind

Geet said...

i survived! :)
yaad to use kiya jaataa hai jise ye dil kabhie bhula bhi pataa hai...
bahut khoob kahi aapne...

Whats in a name.......... said...

geet- thankyou!:)