Thursday, April 24, 2008

Hmmmm....

A first gaze
A second glance,
A third look
A fourth chance.

Myriad dreams built
In a moment a broken Heart.
A Glaring hope
A Charm to die
Lost Forever….
In dreams now they lie…..

12 comments:

Wizard OfCourse said...

magnificent!
short and sweet!
and many such other adjectives come together to tell you that it was a wonderful piece :)
but hey...touch of sadness?? why??

behind brown eyes... said...

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...so thats what the 'hmmmmmmmmmm' was about all these days........hmmmmmm....now i understand....hmmmmmmm...dare i ask...inspired???
but whatever the cause, if the effect is such beauty in rhyme then go for it girl!!! inspire me too :D

Whats in a name.......... said...

wizard-thankyou,,,nothing particular,,
BBE-Hmmmmmm.....this is not the Hmmm,,,u think it is,,and again i dont know why i m sayin that to you!!lol

behind brown eyes... said...

okay mariya my dear...if you insist...i shall believe it to be whatever 'hmmmm' you say it is ;)
but once again...very nice poem! hmmm or no hmmmm

Wizard OfCourse said...

well...well...if you insist :)
but once again. very well written.
keep 'em flowing in lady!

shilpi said...

well as ive said before.. beautiful piece....... bt i hav my doubtss*****!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT'S IN A NAME ? said...

short and sweet.

Whats in a name.......... said...

wats in a name and Shilpi,,,,:) :)

Psychedelic said...

Its damn cute!! :))

Whats in a name.......... said...

hehe,,,tanku tanku my love!!!

Psychedelic said...

*blush*
*hides behind the curtain*
*peeps again*

Whats in a name.......... said...

okkkkkk.........my god!!dont shy away my uhm uhm "love"!!
*kisshhies*