You Bore my burden
You felt me breathe
You stayed up all night
to see me sleep.
You made me laugh,
You wiped my tears.
You held my hand,
Walked me through all my fears..
That hand on my forehead
That peck on my cheeks
That tight hug, the constant counsel,
That pat when i felt weak..
This loneliness
This uncertainty
This wait
This Dilemma
Every passing minute adding on to the already worn out calendar.
But the hope, the constant Hope
of hearing Your laughter,
of that braod smile
of that fond touch
Of Your love
of the hope that You will bring back
The colours to my blind Rainbow..
8 comments:
Very fast and smooth poem, flowing like the lovely river which eventually joins the beautiful horizon where I see colors appearing on your Rainbow!
Very Nice :)
Keep writing busy you!
nice nice. so...finally you've found some time to pen down your thoughts...
I was here before to read you poem and its nice in a way that it smells of a childish innocence.
But "week" should be "weak" I think.
And yes, I have vaporised for I have no stories to tell, nothing to write on. And its reassuring and wonderful to know someone still remembers her namesake reader.
Genie and Wizard- Thankyou!:)
Namesake- Typo Corrected! Thankyou!:)
and , i miss reading your posts. And dont vaporise yet, there is a lof of bad in the world! (If not good), write about the bad things in a good way! (if u know what i mean) hehe.. post awaited!
and the colour filleth...both your blog and your rainbow :) may your cup of joy overflow...
and i shalt stop such speech before thee delete mine this comment :p
lovely poetry. my heart is filled with hopes of love and undying romance...
but then, i don't have a heart
waiting for your next post (and mail)
please ignore above comment, except 'lovely poetry' :D
too much coffee. very little sleep :P
BBE- :) love <3
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